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Enjoy this, while you can... by ~kitsushaayume:iconkitsushaayume:



Enjoy this silence,
One last time,
While you can.
Enjoy this darnkness,
One last day,
While you can.
Enjoy this feeling
As your first,
Enjoy this dream
As your last ...
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Author's Comments

I just did this... :) I wanted to post it! :D ~I think the ending is brilliant... I mean... Anything u see around u can be a dream. You can never know. :(

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:iconferha:
Wow, that's great :'D
:iconkitsushaayume:
thank u... :)

--
Just one more kiss
To see the pain exists
In a world of lies
Misery take my shame alive
And everything
Fails a violent death
The smile you gave
Visit me in HELL tonight
And say
If love exists;
I will FALL ...
S.H.E. & H.I.M.
:iconneplight:
I quite like this, its length contributes to its impact and it reads quite heavily which I believe is also to its advantage. Nice one. ^.^

--
*~*Heather*~*
--------------------------
"The soul purpose of my middle name is so that I can tell when I am in trouble."
:iconkitsushaayume:
thank u! :D :hug:

--
Just one more kiss
To see the pain exists
In a world of lies
Misery take my shame alive
And everything
Fails a violent death
The smile you gave
Visit me in HELL tonight
And say
If love exists;
I will FALL ...
S.H.E. & H.I.M.
:iconneplight:
You are most welcome! =)

--
*~*Heather*~*
--------------------------
"The soul purpose of my middle name is so that I can tell when I am in trouble."

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